Concern Level: Medium-High
The main concern revolves around how this first installment of the series leaves off and is discussed in much more detail in the “Our Thoughts” sectio... → Continue reading below
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Young Whit and the Traitor’s Treasure
VERDICT: Prayerfully Consider
Concern Level: Medium-High

Concern LevelMedium-High
Concerning & Potentially Concerning Content
The main concern revolves around how this first installment of the series leaves off and is discussed in much more detail in the “Our Thoughts” section below. Please make sure you read that section carefully and prayerfully considered before allowing your child to read this title. --- While that first item is by far and away the biggest deal, there is more potentially concerning content to be aware of. The book opens with a dream that we come to realize the main character, Whit, is having because his mom passed away. It mentions her being in a casket. This thought may disturb some readers. Similarly, while this is eventually explained in a natural way, Whit sees a man in a mysterious cloak standing in a field with a dagger. --- The main character does a very dangerous experiment with a lightning rod that we wouldn’t want kids running out and trying. This is probably important to discuss. --- There is a lot of sneaking around, asking friends not to talk about what happened where parents can hear it, sneaking out, etc. In the worst cases, stepmom agrees not to tell dad something and later dad blatantly lies to cover for his son. While we realize these are common story elements, we would have loved to have seen them handled differently in a Christian title. --- A few other minor items worth noting. There is a mention of “snitches and stool pigeons” (often used to guilt kids into not reporting negative moral behavior). A female character is described as looking like Teddy Roosevelt. The book is set in the south way in the past and there is a decent amount of “pro-south” feelings in the small town, which most kids won’t be familiar with today.
VerdictPrayerfully Consider
Our Thoughts
A Christian title from Focus on the Family and Adventures in Odyssey as a Prayerfully Consider?! What kept it from the expected “Highly Recommended” verdict of similar titles? The huge issue lies in how the book wraps up. This title follows a common format of nicely wrapping up the primary mystery of the book while leaving the reader with a cliffhanger concerning the larger mystery and storyline of the series. The issue here is that this title leaves us with two items that, left on their own, should be very concerning to the Christian parent. First off, while the Christian faith comes up in various ways throughout, the book leaves children having read a story through the eyes of a main character who is skeptical, not so sure what they believe and attending worship in a negative way. This would be understandable content for the early and middle parts of a story that later wraps up nicely, but that is not the case here. Also, in other Christian titles we would normally see this lack of faith having all types of negative impacts on the character, as it does in real life, but Whit is already kind, brave, a great friend, stands up for others… despite not taking his faith seriously. To leave such a critically important aspect (the most important aspect) unresolved at the end of book one is not a picture we want to leave our kids with, especially from a Christian title. Second, after a full story devoid of any fantasy or magical elements the main character is left convinced that an ancient cloth passed down from previous generations has magical healing powers, proven to him by a miraculous healing of a dog. Now, while we believe it is extremely likely that in future titles young Whit will come to fully accept Jesus as savior as many around him do and that somehow the healing will be explained in another way, a way that gives God the glory, we believe it is a major failure on the part of Christian authors and publisher to assume all children will go on to read a multi-part series immediately after the first title. This is all far too important to leave something this critical to chance. --- The above is too bad because there is quite a bit of good in this title. The opening picture shows a Bible (we find out there are family Bibles passed down through generations from both sides of Whit’s family). When Whit says “Not that God stuff” to his stepmom she replies, “Is that any way to talk about the Creator of the universe?” followed by “And one day, I pray you’ll see just how important the ‘God stuff’ really is.” Whit and his stepmom have a beautiful relationship (Mom passed away). Dad prays at a meal. Whit is kind, brave, intelligent and stands up for others against bullying. Another solid character, the janitor, says that “The Good Lord made you courageous. He done it for a reason” and later “Ain’t no good trying to dance around His plan for you because you think it will make your life easier”. The family goes to church and we hear about the Greatest Commandment and the shed blood of Jesus (unfortunately Walt is typically not that into it and considers the services his “thinking time” where he is partially checked out). After church two friends come home and naturally want to apologize to each other for squabbling. Bible verses are used as clues needed to solve the crime. There is also a great friendship shown. The action is mysterious and exciting without being scary or dark. --- All that said, we again think that the primary concern item can easily overshadow the good. Some things should be considered non-starters. Our suggestion, for this series of the young life of a prominent figure in the later Adventures in Odyssey series, would be to either a) skip it for other Christian options or b) commit to read the full series yourself first, ensure the items mentioned above are resolved in a faith-building way and then, if so, ensure that your child reads the full series one after another with no breaks in-between. This is another example of why we all need to be very intentional and cautious in what our child reads.
Plot SummaryNote: This information is typically from the publisher.Use with caution
Something sinister happened decades ago to disgrace the Whittaker name. --- Whit and his family (father, Harold; stepmother, Fiona; half-sister, Charlie) have just moved to Provenance, NC, in the middle of the Great Depression. Harold will be teaching at nearby Duke University. Not-quite-10-year-old Johnny soon makes a friend in Emmy, who lives across the street and joins him in his adventures. At his new school, he encounters a bully who makes his life miserable, and he makes a new friend in Huck, the custodian. Both of them play key roles in the mysteries and action. --- The central mystery in book 1 involves Confederate gold missing since the end of the Civil War and the question of whether Johnny’s ancestor was the coward and thief who stole it, as everyone believes.
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How can a young person stay on the path of purity? By living according to your word. I seek you with all my heart; do not let me stray from your commands. I have hidden your word in my heart that I might not sin against you. Praise be to you, Lord; teach me your decrees. With my lips I recount all the laws that come from your mouth. I rejoice in following your statutes as one rejoices in great riches. I meditate on your precepts and consider your ways. I delight in your decrees; I will not neglect your word.
— Psalm 119:9-16
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